Some Infinities Are Bigger Than Others

Some Infinities Are Bigger Than Others

A Poem by Davidgeo
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Some infinities are bigger than others
Some live's are more lively than others
Some enemies are more enemy than others
Some water's are wetter than others
Some friend's are more friendly than others
Some talent's are worth more than others
Some hell's are hotter than others
Some time's are more timely than others
Some broke is more broken than others
Some dead is deader than others
Some ending's end more than others
Sometimes it goes on forever. . . 

© 2019 Davidgeo


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So first of all, I got to give you props for putting pictures on all your poems. I’m new to the community and you’re the first I’ve seen also do that.

Enjoyed the poem! I’d be curious to what your personal definition of an “infinity” would be.

Haven’t heard anything about Him for a long time lol. What’s your favorite song from them?

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KWP

4 Years Ago

:D

indeed!
Apollos

4 Years Ago

So what are the right questions?
Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

That's the right question.



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your words truly paints a new picture of the universe...i would love to see you further expand the notion behind infinity..great write

Posted 3 Years Ago


Great realization! But what matters most is, to whatever state we are, we need to learn to be content.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

3 Years Ago

That is a privilege only a small percentage of the world's population will ever experience. It's ea.. read more
R J Askew

3 Years Ago

Interesting. And some, if n when they do get time to think, don’t know how to or can’t face it.
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K
With what I'm going through right now, this hits hard.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really enjoyed this. The repetition put a lot of emphasis on the plot of the poem

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

Normally I hate repetition. But replication, reproduction and repetition are basically the same thi.. read more
very thought provoking. i love it!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this actually make sme think of what our conversation was just now ... it's all passing time ... I'm still gonna write that damn poem :D X

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

mind and body strong grasshopper. the word passing, it exists because of time. I'm supposed to be .. read more
So first of all, I got to give you props for putting pictures on all your poems. I’m new to the community and you’re the first I’ve seen also do that.

Enjoyed the poem! I’d be curious to what your personal definition of an “infinity” would be.

Haven’t heard anything about Him for a long time lol. What’s your favorite song from them?

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KWP

4 Years Ago

:D

indeed!
Apollos

4 Years Ago

So what are the right questions?
Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

That's the right question.

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