Some Infinities Are Bigger Than Others

Some Infinities Are Bigger Than Others

A Poem by Dave
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Some infinities are bigger than others
Some live's are more lively than others
Some enemies are more enemy than others
Some water's are wetter than others
Some friend's are more friendly than others
Some talent's are worth more than others
Some hell's are hotter than others
Some time's are more timely than others
Some broke is more broken than others
Some dead is deader than others
Some ending's end more than others
Sometimes it goes on forever. . . 

© 2019 Dave


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So first of all, I got to give you props for putting pictures on all your poems. I’m new to the community and you’re the first I’ve seen also do that.

Enjoyed the poem! I’d be curious to what your personal definition of an “infinity” would be.

Haven’t heard anything about Him for a long time lol. What’s your favorite song from them?

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KWP

4 Weeks Ago

:D

indeed!
Apollos

3 Weeks Ago

So what are the right questions?
Dave

3 Weeks Ago

That's the right question.



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I really enjoyed this. The repetition put a lot of emphasis on the plot of the poem

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dave

3 Weeks Ago

Normally I hate repetition. But replication, reproduction and repetition are basically the same thi.. read more
very thought provoking. i love it!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this actually make sme think of what our conversation was just now ... it's all passing time ... I'm still gonna write that damn poem :D X

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dave

4 Weeks Ago

mind and body strong grasshopper. the word passing, it exists because of time. I'm supposed to be .. read more
So first of all, I got to give you props for putting pictures on all your poems. I’m new to the community and you’re the first I’ve seen also do that.

Enjoyed the poem! I’d be curious to what your personal definition of an “infinity” would be.

Haven’t heard anything about Him for a long time lol. What’s your favorite song from them?

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KWP

4 Weeks Ago

:D

indeed!
Apollos

3 Weeks Ago

So what are the right questions?
Dave

3 Weeks Ago

That's the right question.

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