big hands

big hands

A Poem by Davidgeo
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big hands they cannot catch mice
worthless though, not so much
the big tree, does not bear fruit
but a great shadow, where i rest
there is cause, there is purpose
in the empty lands 
i find no regrets
where i rest...

© 2021 Davidgeo


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There is a purpose in everything. Maybe not everyone sees that. Your tree does not bear fruit but it provides welcome shade from summer heat. This poem speaks to me about finding contentment in what one has, in the way one lives their life. You have no regrets in the empty lands where you rest. It is a lovely piece of brevity.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

2 Years Ago

Regret, to me, is the greatest of battle wounds. Of course I have them but I do my best to avoid th.. read more



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Big hangs have a purpose just have big tree give lots of shade.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is a purpose in everything. Maybe not everyone sees that. Your tree does not bear fruit but it provides welcome shade from summer heat. This poem speaks to me about finding contentment in what one has, in the way one lives their life. You have no regrets in the empty lands where you rest. It is a lovely piece of brevity.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

2 Years Ago

Regret, to me, is the greatest of battle wounds. Of course I have them but I do my best to avoid th.. read more
There is great power in simple phrases. Amidst the twist and turn of words the depths of boundless human emotion is contained. Sometimes we are more suited to be what we are and not what we want. Lovely poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

2 Years Ago

That is a lovely interpretation. Thank you for that.

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Added on July 1, 2021
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