The Void

The Void

A Poem by Gregory Stires

Darkness

Sorrow,alone

Suffering,lonely,pain

Crying

© 2016 Gregory Stires


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The void demands payment when we look into its awfulness - even if we were unwilling voyeurs there's a price extracted - we will never be the same again.
Gregory Im sorry but this didn't really say the void to me - the darkness, yes - loneliness, yes but the void that many of us know is far more terrible.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Gregory Stires

4 Years Ago

this was one of my old poem that i found and had forgotten about and i found it again while scrollin.. read more
this is so sad and dark. i love it!!!!!!!!!! :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gregory Stires

4 Years Ago

thanks i found it again on my word press, this one i submitted to my schools poetry anthology i thin.. read more
Rose Jaeger Kaneki

4 Years Ago

welcome, wow

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Added on March 7, 2016
Last Updated on March 7, 2016
Tags: void, tears, lonliness, lonely, darkness, angst


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