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Tea Break

Tea Break

A Poem by indu
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..traveling time

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Trains passing between times
stopped for a tea break.
Saw a chai wala but his tea pot was empty.
Trains started moving out weeping 'choo choo choooooo'.
Nosing for the next tea break.

© 2010 indu


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Lovely!
Short, simple and beautiful!
I love the imagery you used too...

Posted 14 Years Ago


Hope that this time…
Tea pot will not be empty…
Nice work….
Pithy and short..I liked it…


Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice. Short and sweet. Keeps my attention. I like the imagery. I think my favorite part would have to be about the train weeing its "choo choo." :)

Thanks for sharing! :)

-JH

Posted 14 Years Ago


this was very well written :) i loved it i too love tea preferably tea from china or japan

Posted 14 Years Ago


how wonderful, thanks for the journey, and the tea break

Posted 14 Years Ago


A lovely poem. Simple, yet enjoyable.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on June 12, 2010
Last Updated on July 2, 2010
Tags: Train, Tea, Chaiwala

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indu
indu

Cochin, India



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