Tea Break

..traveling time

Trains passing between times

stopped for a tea break.

Saw a chai wala but his tea pot was empty.

Trains started moving out weeping 'choo choo choooooo'.

Nosing for the next tea break.

Reviews

[Louise]

Lovely!
Short, simple and beautiful!
I love the imagery you used too...

[JENY]

Hope that this time…
Tea pot will not be empty…
Nice work….
Pithy and short..I liked it…

[José Humilde]

Nice. Short and sweet. Keeps my attention. I like the imagery. I think my favorite part would have to be about the train weeing its "choo choo." :)

Thanks for sharing! :)

-JH

[DeadToTheWorld]

this was very well written :) i loved it i too love tea preferably tea from china or japan

[Ed Hart]

how wonderful, thanks for the journey, and the tea break

[PadfootBlack]

A lovely poem. Simple, yet enjoyable.