The Way You Look At Me

Playing with words to make a little rap

The way you look at me 

light as a feather 

eyes locked on each other

the dislike from your brother 

makes me miss my mother

the way you look at me 

makes my heart stop

and stand for a while

and your smile

makes me crumble into a pile

as we row across the nile

and you turn me like a dial

as we run for a mile

the way you look at me 

makes my heart skip

like I'm taken a dip

into death

as I take my last breath

Author's Note

I feel like I had some good rhymes going

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

You did indeed. Last line was a bummer, though.