Open your Eyes

I thought we were the end game 

I thought we were each others ride or die 

I saw your true colors 

I saw the darker side of your true person  

I am now just blowing through life

I know you will never open up your eyes

You will never see that I am right in front of you

Open up your eyes and see the caring person in front of you

I know 

I know

I know you won't open up your eyes

I thought we were the end game 

I thought we were each others ride or die 

I saw your true colors 

I saw the darker side of your true person 

 

I saw you are dishonest and unloving

I saw your hatred

I saw the true side of you 

Why can't we restart are life and show each other the people we can be

I have my eyes wide open and i know who i am 

I know who i want to be

Now I know you won't open up your eyes because they are shut forever

Reviews

[Red Brick Keshner]

Keep true to yourself, remain dauntless. There are many more years ahead. True to self is true to others.

[lessa (kenzie)]

full of raw emotion, very well expressed feelings.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

The ending is powerful and can be taken in more than one way. I like how clear the poem is up to the end. The end adds so much volume to this write thought and I liked that part the most. tyfs