What's My Secret?

More than the law of attraction.

Breaking Free
Bouncing Back
To Positivity

Barriers Unlimited
Willing Power
To Greatness

Becoming Joyful
Manifesting Bliss
Abundance Expands

What's My Secret?
Positivity
But most of all Belief
It's all one and the same.


Little Mouse
February 26, 2008

Author's Note

*After watching the movie "The Secret" for the second time, which I recommend of course.

Reviews

[Carole]

I am such an advocate of "Positivity." When you have a chance, read-"Always Remember the Glass." I think it might be right in line with this.

Barriers Unlimited
Willing Power
To Greatness

Becoming Joyful
Manifesting Bliss
Abundance Expands

Positivity definitely brings joy, bliss and abundance. It is a key to successful living in my books. Thanks for sharing....

XOXO Carole

[Robert Haigh]

We all have to try to retain positivity, no matter what life throws at us. Not always easy, but we have to try.

[poetic soul]

hmmm.. thats a nice lil secret, gal! :) loved the simplicity in here.....

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

[Rhonda]

This reminds me of my favorite project, postsecret.com

Great, simple read.

Thanks for sharing!
-R

[Belator Books]

The uneven capitalization was a bit distracting, but besides that a nice bit of fluid frippery.

[Kathleen Marie]

Very sweet and encouraging... Very nice

[Gema]

Aww this is cute and shows power through words!
I really like love the way you have written!
It shows such bliss in life and that if your positive everything runs smoothly!
It's a good thing to have positivity YOU GO GIRL!
Very well written x

[Michael X]

The first stanza alone speaks valumes.. breaking free..bouncing back.. to positivity.. but Firstly I have to say
I loved the intriquate wording.. the shaping of sentences classically justifies your thoughts..
and to break away from turmoils- angsts and life's problems or just every day situations that arise
and need to be over come.. this awsome poem shows the point of attraction..between positivity

and belief-the point where heart succeeds obsticle-and with encouraging effects-- such expressions
leave the reader feeling uplifted -such secrets are timeless and when called upon gives the soul
needed strength to move beyond circumstances You presented your writing in full circle fashion..
Marvelous.. I really enjoyed reading this

[Just Manoosh]

This poem bounces around the room. You have a wonderful touch.
Mx

[Solst Rapture]

It is funny, whenever I read something of yours, it seems as if the timing has been crafted by something. Yesterday I sat in the garden underneath the sun and pretty much meditated on my faith in myself and well, I'll not be shy, my angel. Although I couldn't know for sure about anything, I knew for sure that I was safe and that I am going be able to feel love for a long time to come. I also read something about 'the secret' which was merely a different language for many of the things I have read about faith. So this is pretty apt. I love it's briefness. It makes it feel pure, fresh and efficient. The second stanza was my favorite. It flowed like water.

[Poeticpiers]

positive thinking is the secret of not only success but happiness. You express yourself clearly in poetic prose the great secret is to know yourself and accept yourself as you are the good and the bad.

ivor aka poeticpiers