Ongoing

Ongoing

A Poem by A.K

the spirit we felt
 the power we got
 the laugh we had
 the pain... we suffered 
 all shattered like a torn pieces of paper...

the love we had 
the agony which made us suffer
why bother it?

 smile we had on our face
 the care we received 
joyfulness we felt
were took away without thinking of a second
 it went off like a swirling winds
 takes a stone away....

© 2020 A.K


Author's Note

A.K
Re wrote in different form...hope its nice

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Relationships can give so much but they can also take much away when they fail. That's where your poem took me.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


A.K

3 Years Ago

Thanks for reading...it not only takes much away but also leaves us with a unforgettable pain...anyw.. read more
i like it, its a little hard to read i had to go back through it a second time but its good.

Posted 3 Years Ago


A.K

3 Years Ago

thanks for reading it ...its my pleasure you like it...and i would like to say sorry if theres a mis.. read more

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Added on November 20, 2020
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A.K
A.K

Kathmandu, Hindu, Nepal



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