Fair Law vs. Abusive Love

Fair Law vs. Abusive Love

A Poem by Livenrite

In court, you stand up when being spoken to
In love, I sit when I'm being yelled at
In court, you can say objection
In love, I reluctantly embrace the bat
In court, your family is behind you
In love I must always suffer alone
In court you can post bail
In love, I'm forced to go home 
In court and love, both wait a sentence
But in court, you're innocent until proven guilty
And in love, I am guilty until proven innocent

© 2010 Livenrite


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Very good idea, comparing the two. I love the last lines:
"In court, you're innocent until proven guilty
and in love, I am guilty until proven innocent."
Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


not necessarily true and pessimistic but still very well done! keep it up!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful. Simply wonderful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


hmmm...

tragic...

Posted 13 Years Ago


o m g ! wow wow wow
i absolutely love this one!
well done hun.... :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on May 13, 2010
Last Updated on May 14, 2010

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Livenrite
Livenrite

Brooklyn, NY



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