I am Oliviana

I am Oliviana

A Poem by allonsy_doctor
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I am Oliviana...!

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Who am I?

I am Edward

Brave and Bold

Strong and Silent

With a gift oh so rare

 

I am Bella

Happy and Wild

Generous and Kind

With a Life so Interesting

 

I am Jacob

Obvious and Eerie

Mysterious and Literall

With a form oh so excrusiating

 

I am Oliviana

Happy and Crazy

Warm and Insane

With a Life oh so Wonderful

 

Who am I?

I am Oliviana.

Definately.

 

(Disclaimer: I do not own Edward, Bella, or Jake. Stephinie Meyer does. She created Twilight, after all.)

© 2009 allonsy_doctor


Author's Note

allonsy_doctor
Who are you?? I used Twilight to say I could be Bella, or Edward, or Jake, but I choose to be Oliviana...!

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This is good! I really like how you chose yourself over all of those other famous characters that many wish that they shared a life with. It shows that you love yourself, even with your faults. You are only human, after all, and you make mistakes. You might want to find some better adjectives for Jacob, because I didn't think of him that way. Over-all, it was a great piece, and with a little bit of changes, it could be really great. Good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


hehehe...i think im more like Bella :)
Which is kinda funny since its almost like Belle :D

Posted 12 Years Ago



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