Six feet Under

Sometimes
All you wanna do is cry
When your life is falling six feet under the ground

Sometimes
You want someone to just left you up
When your life is falling six feet under the ground

No one understands
No one knows
What the pain feels like when you're all alone
No one cares
About you and your stupid troubles

You just have to learn to fight,
When your life is falling six feet under the ground.

Author's Note

I don't have time to punctuate that...It's horrible but I don't care right now i'm going through a rough time...Review...I'll fix it later, bye.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

This is a vivid, emotional write. Your use of the phrase immediately captures that sense of pain and death hovering... Powerful metaphor for walking in a state of death.