The Colors Of My Life

One of my fav. poems I've ever written. I hope you all like !

   Writing your name in my notebook, thinking how pretty your voice would look if I could only gather all the colors to paint the simplest "hello", because when you speak I see all the colors flying off your soft lips making the rainbows in the sky. At the end of every rainbow shines your smile. Color my world? Babe, you color my life. I use to see in black and white but with you my world is HD.  You make me see shades of color, the grass is not green, no, but shades of yellow and blue. The night is not black, it's every color collapsed into each other because my world got tired and now you must rest. The only time my world isn't in color is when you are resting and your lips are no longer forming.. the colors of my life.

Reviews

[Fabio_Cassilias]

Very Refreshing Poem..Love it

[Sammy]

This is beautiful. It sums up exactly how I'm feeling right now in my life, but I could never have expressed it this uniquely. I think that if it was given a little bit more structure, it would be a really amazing piece of poetry.

[Johnny Westbrook]

Love it. remember when you text this to me