Eyes to the Soul

Eyes to the Soul

A Poem by aliyah
"

the first time I saw you it was-- enticing, to say the least

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A cigar stuck between your lips

Your hands on my hips, remembering our first kiss

The first day we ever looked in the same direction
Forgetting our imperfections, to see our true reflections

In the eyes of our soul.

© 2021 aliyah


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aliyah
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The rhyme danced like two lovers.Lovely.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aliyah

1 Week Ago

thank you very much!!❤
Woah, this is awesome! I really loved this, all of it, the rhyming even was perfect. Please keep writing and posting because this is great. (: I wouldn't change anything or take anything out, honestly. You're definitely a great writer.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


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aliyah

2 Weeks Ago

THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH FOR THIS COMMENT! I APOLOGIZE FOR THE LATE RESPONSE BUT THIS MADE MY NIGHT! I.. read more
Colacat

2 Weeks Ago

My pleasure! I’ll definitely check it out!

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Added on May 30, 2021
Last Updated on May 30, 2021
Tags: #love #relationship #firsttimewe

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aliyah
aliyah

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I'm a 13 year old author/ poetry writer all of my work are original! I write different poetry in the category of sadness, fantasy, horror, mystery etc. more..

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