Colors

Colors

A Poem by Lizardo

In the quest for happiness
We are blind and colorless
'Cause we can't see how life
Tries everyday to cheer us up

Our vision is in black and white
We can't see the colors of life
The colors that cheer us up

But let me tell you 
That we are blind too
'Cause we pay more atention
To the Criticism thats agains you
Then to the colors of Life

What is the point of life
If you can't see it's colors?

© 2015 Lizardo


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I loved this poem and Oh my goodness 15, are you kidding. This is so brilliant; you are so wise beyond your years. This poem says so much of humanity, the way people are in their little bubbles and choose not to look at one and all in their circumstances. It is quite profound and you are a great writer. Please keep writing. Thank you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Confuser

6 Years Ago

I hope one day when you are much older you look back and see with experience how great this poem rea.. read more
Lizardo

6 Years Ago

I will do it, I want to be an aerospace engeener but for my hobby I want to be a great write, I'll s.. read more
Confuser

6 Years Ago

Take your time....but don't waste it. You have many gifts I am certain.
Inspirational write with so much colorful facts to appreciate...:).......

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lizardo

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Sami, You are really apprecieted
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).......
Cheery little ditty.
Appreciate the message and the brevity, Lizardo.
Even more improvement, young poet!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lizardo

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Frankie!
A great message Lizardo, if we open our minds we'll see things in a different light.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lizardo

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Ana, and happy 2015!
I like how you incorporated colors into this poem to get the message across, it makes this poem feel unique. I think this is now one of my favorites of yours!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lizardo

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Dan, I really appreciete it Friend :)
DoormanDan

6 Years Ago

Anytime(unless its at 1:30am lol)
Lizardo

6 Years Ago

hahaha I feel that bro, you couldn't of say it much better lol
when we see things only in black and white, we miss so much of what life has to offer...

outside the box is where the really good action is...but those who think in narrow strips of fate, never find that action.

nicely expressed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lizardo

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Jacob

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Added on January 1, 2015
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