Some Thoughts about Life

Some Thoughts about Life

A Poem by Lizardo
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I think about this all the time

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And there we are 
Talking to someone
Waiting for the answered in your mind
To your question
Be said by them
In the deepest part of our heart
We want something to happen
But we denied all of that thought from our heart
We see people walking the streets
Probably make false statements about them
Without even knowing them
But it's not our fault
It's the brain that jumps to conclusions
That are sometimes Wrong or correct
Happpiness is something we feel
Something we don't want to let it go
But in the deepest part of our soul
We feel Sadness at the same time we feel happiness
Because we know that happiness will go at sometime of our life
We usually don't want to let go of someone
But we feel like we could be better without them
We see the world so real
That we think that it's all a computer game
with millions of pixels we can't even differ

© 2015 Lizardo


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Great job Lizardo!
I really like how your English is getting much better, great poem and very inspirational.
I see the great potential in your words.
Keep up the great work and soon you'll become a great author!

C. Lee Battaglia

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lizardo

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much C.Lee! I will try and thank you a lot!
C. Lee Battaglia

6 Years Ago

your welcome.
Very great poem, and thought provoking. Great job. (see Vanesa Markovics review) I noticed that too but noticed she already told you) Awesome job, keep it up.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lizardo

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Quick question.
Did you mean false statements?

Otherwise a very honest write, something I always appreciate!
-VM

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lizardo

6 Years Ago

Yeah false statements I miss that, Thank you so much
Very sincere and direct. Nice job.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lizardo

6 Years Ago

Thamk you so much
You are very good at writing poems like this one! I absolutely positively LOVE this poem! NEVAR STOP WRITING! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lizardo

6 Years Ago

Coming from you, I really means a lot :) Thank you so much Dan
DoormanDan

6 Years Ago

You are very welcome :)
It's hard to believe that you are 15! I thought I was young! Could you be past the ignorance is bliss stage in your life my friend? This piece certainly suggests that!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lizardo

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Martin! I really appreciete your review :) and thank you a lot
Golly, this is remarkable! I love the first stanza:) My mind can hardly process how talented you are:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lizardo

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much BFF :)
Cool Girl

6 Years Ago

Haha, you're welcome, BFF!!!
I love how deep you delve Lizardo, its way too deep for me - Im a shallow guy lol
but this :
"But it's not our fault
It's the brain that jumps to conclusions
That are sometimes Wrong or correct" - I had an issue with and that nothing to do wth you - it made me think is all - do WE judge or does the brain do that for us - hmmm... very interesting

The end is enigmatic - we could be in a simulation - doesnt have to be a game - the new versions of VR (Occulus Rift) are testament to the real nature of new computing power, and once quantum computers come along there may indeed be NO difference.

You never skirt around the danger zone Lizardo - you're so in tune with yourself. Its awesome.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lizardo

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much ANTO, I really appreciete it. The Occulus rift? it's very true and the quantum com.. read more
i feel what you have written is quite true.... a very well written piece....true depiction of emotions....

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lizardo

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Anurag, I really appreciete it
It's interesting that you write being hapy and sad is the same, I suppose you mean chemically in our brains. Great emotional power in your writing. I will never get over your age in comparison to your maturity and the words packed full of starbursts...with millions of pixels we can't even differ. Makes me wonder if one day that is how it may truly be.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lizardo

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I really appreciate it
Confuser

6 Years Ago

You are welcome Lizardo. Have a wonderful day.

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