Ain't it Fun

Ain't it Fun

A Poem by Lizardo
"

Paramore

"
Hear us out
Hear us now
We have something to say now
Hear us out
Listen now
We have words writen down
Dont sit there ignoring us
Would it be fun if we talk like adults?

Ain't it fun
The world that we live in now
Ain't it fun
There are dreams flying around my house
Just look up the sky
Hear us now, hear us now

I always wonder
If a perfect life would make us strong?
Every fall
Every win
Everything
Makes us stronger, one foot on perfection
Would it be fun, to live a perfect life?
Hear us now, We have something to say

Would it be fun
To afront reality itself
To suffer and feel the pain
To understand what our friends are going through
To feel happy or sad
Would it be fun...
To just be like how we are
Nothing changing us
No, theres nothing changing us
Watch from your window now
Watch reality
In the News
Manipulated or right
Reality is just outside
Understand the pain

Ain't it fun
To live a life
To fight for whats right
To have friends
Ain't it fun
To feel happy 
To dream 
What wrong it there?
Hear us now
We have something to say
Don't put tape on our mouths
We have something say
Fear is consuming us
Great enemy of mine
Don't feel scare my friend

Ain't it fun
Reality is a game
Don't look to the wrong
Ain't it fun, Ain't it fun
The world is here and there
Space and time are up and down
Ain't it fun, Ain't it fun
to fight for your dreams
To never give up

Ain't it fun....

© 2015 Lizardo


Author's Note

Lizardo
I put some creativity to my work, I hope it turned out well

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

I like the wit in this Lizardo. It is tongue-in-cheek but also carries serious philosophical queries (reality is a game - a hot topic in many fields where we are thought to be living in a SIM world).
I like the experimental use of the text font and colours - I have to say that I like it better than the ones that had the text all over the shop (and for good reason), but thats just because Im a neat freak ;).
Yeah, anyway , the multicolours adds to that 'fun' aspect. I really liked this part -
"Ain't it fun
The world that we live in now
Ain't it fun
There are dreams flying around my house" - a pure Lizardo-ism - sorry if you dont like being an 'ism' I will withdraw that if you wish but I mean it in homage to your brilliant mind.
Good one my friend. :))

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lizardo

5 Years Ago

hahaha Don't worry ANTO, I'm happy your back :')
I like the Lizardo-ism thing, and thank you.. read more
ANTO

5 Years Ago

Change is good. Im too conservative in that regard - fair play to you my friend and thanks - for all.. read more
Lizardo

5 Years Ago

You're welcome ANTO :), you're welcome



Reviews

It turned out Amazingly well...to say the least.
I very much so enjoyed!
C:

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lizardo

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much for taking your time and reviewing this piece of my work! :)
ashleymarie

5 Years Ago

No problem
I like the wit in this Lizardo. It is tongue-in-cheek but also carries serious philosophical queries (reality is a game - a hot topic in many fields where we are thought to be living in a SIM world).
I like the experimental use of the text font and colours - I have to say that I like it better than the ones that had the text all over the shop (and for good reason), but thats just because Im a neat freak ;).
Yeah, anyway , the multicolours adds to that 'fun' aspect. I really liked this part -
"Ain't it fun
The world that we live in now
Ain't it fun
There are dreams flying around my house" - a pure Lizardo-ism - sorry if you dont like being an 'ism' I will withdraw that if you wish but I mean it in homage to your brilliant mind.
Good one my friend. :))

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lizardo

5 Years Ago

hahaha Don't worry ANTO, I'm happy your back :')
I like the Lizardo-ism thing, and thank you.. read more
ANTO

5 Years Ago

Change is good. Im too conservative in that regard - fair play to you my friend and thanks - for all.. read more
Lizardo

5 Years Ago

You're welcome ANTO :), you're welcome
Very deep and thought-provoking, I enjoyed reading this!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lizardo

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much! Thank you for stopping by and reading this, I sincerly appreciete it :)
It some sense the world is perfect because it is imperfect. I get your drift Lizardo. Your hope is brimming and reaching the upper atmosphere.

Regards,
Al

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lizardo

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much Alfred, you understood my poem :)
One voice that speaks for all the youths that are not taken seriously in most cases or that have been silenced with tapes. You are a thinker and a truth-seeker.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lizardo

5 Years Ago

Well, you got the thinker and truth seeker right haha. but thats what the poem was meant to be, spe.. read more
Great write, it seemed like a ballad to me, I wished it didn't end as the imagery this piece made me visualize as so great... Im betting writing it must've been quite a trip in itself. beautiful work . cheers

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lizardo

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much Roshan, I'm glad you liked this one :)
There is a perfect flow to your words, which makes it so easy to read..and the message within is just as wonderful.
Great writing!

:) Julie

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lizardo

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much Julie! I'm glad you liked it :)
A pertinent and timely conveyance. This projects the best of who we could be! Your form and flow also perfection.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lizardo

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind review! I really appreciete it
Love the point you make in this one!
Keep it up!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lizardo

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Innovative presentation; repetition of the poem's title added to the piece's effectiveness.
Enjoyed this read, Lizardo; it was refreshing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lizardo

5 Years Ago

Thank you Frankie, I'm glad you liked it

First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

661 Views
16 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on February 10, 2015
Last Updated on February 10, 2015
Tags: Life

Author

Lizardo
Lizardo

LA , CA



About
16 year old boy, Just another human in this world. I think I suck at writing, but yet I write to improve. more..

Writing
The Wolves The Wolves

A Poem by Lizardo


Untitled Untitled

A Book by Lizardo



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


End End

A Poem by Lizardo