Jornada del Muerto

Narritive poem, were not giving up...

Come on now

We stand up

this field is full of blood

Of our fallen ones

We're not giving up

May all us fall down

We're not quiting now

We're not quiting now

Jornada del muerto

When they come

And try to take us down

But NO

We stand right up

although the sky is black

We stand up

We fight for hope and love

We're not quiting

Were not quiting

Earth may be againts us

Oh no

We're not quiting now

The day that they come for us souls

Oh no

We're not dying today

Our dreams keep us from drowning

Jornada del muerto doesn't scared us

"Cause we fight for love and hope and dreams

In a world where we're all heroes

We're all heroes

Jornada del muerto

When they take us down

to the ground

But we get up

Carrying our worlds

Oh no

We're not quiting now

We will defeand our faith

God will help us all along

Our lives are with him

Oh God will help us

We defeand our faith

Oh no

We're not quiting

Oh no

We're not quiting

Throw us everything you have

We will stand up right here

We're not moving from this spot

Reviews

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

It makes me think of all those protestors in the streets or in the fields, fighting for a good cause and risking their lives. Very powerful voice.

[Lizardo]

Thanks Nadia, I appreciete for taking your time on reading this one!

[MsJewel]

I like the creativity in format and the message within is just as wonderful. Thanks so much for the RR. A great poem my friend

:) Julie

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Julie, I'm glad you liked it

[CA Anurag Sharma]

so inspiring.... a great great write...some of the lines are just amazing.....

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Anuran! I really appreciete it friend

[Emily]

I like your wording!
Well done!!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[Tania]

Powerful poem ! Enjoyed reading this !!!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[Not here]

Wow this was really good Lizardo! I loved how it looked with all the different alignments and even without those it was still a very powerful poem! Never give up bro!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much bro!

[Cool Girl]

This was so powerful! Never give up! We'll never give up :)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much! Of course we aren't!

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome and great!

[Valentine]

Vibrant ...forceful write. Valentine

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[Fran Marie]

A powerful piece of poetry..wonderfully penned

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked this one!

[DoormanDan]

I like what you did with this poem! This really does have the atmosphere of a poem that would be played in a video tribute to soldiers. This isn extremely strong piece! All i have to point out is that you mispelled defend with an extra a, and in the word against you flip flopped the s and t. Typos, they get us all :)

[Lizardo]

Alright then, I wil fix those. Thank you so much Dan! :)