Hurricane Of Thoughts

Hurricane Of Thoughts

A Poem by Lizardo
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Its been quite a long time, how did you like this one?

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Waking up better
Fire in the ether 
Talking up better
Until it feels better
Waking up rested
Dreaming Of the better

Consumption on its way
Making it hard to throw it all away
To live in this Hurricane of thoughts

Creating something better
Until it looks seller 
Waking up stellar

Talking what you feel
Until it leaves you real 

Making our way
In this hurricane is thought
Is not the same as the weight on your back or in your lap
Feeling like the end is near
Trying to build so it makes you clear 
Clear to the rest of the world 

Love until it ends 
Heaven on the earth 
Family and Friends 

Waking up better
Until you feel better 
Life is not same 
In this Hurricane of Thoughts 
Life is not dream
In this world of mine

© 2015 Lizardo


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Dude, I don't know if you sing or rap but this poem definitely needs some music put to it. I was humming to it when I read it. I freaking love this. It flows. It goes. It shows your inner emotions. I freaking love this and I thank you so much for sharing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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zardo, see I knew I'd find another great one you've written. Not lately I used to review you all the time. You have a lot of talent, give yourself some credit. Nice write! take care...dan

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lizardo

7 Years Ago

I consider myself to not have talent, but I do consider the fact the I can improve my writing better.. read more
dan

7 Years Ago

You're welcome. Good luck to you! take care...dan

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