This Is To the Girl

This Is To the Girl

A Poem by L Lopez

This is to the girl that rightfully made me cry,

Is to the one that made me want to change my life,

To the one that told me to stop living a lie,

To the one that pushed me more then I’ve ever tried.


When I saw you first, I paused, you had caught my eye.

You had this beauty and sparkle when you smile.

This strong attraction made me want to give a try,

And get to know you and hangout for a while.


Gave in to desire shortly after saying hi,

Sex so great it was an offer I could not decline,

Yet I learned that I loved what you had inside,

So much goodness, I knew I had made quite the find.


You were more then just some girl this I can’t deny,

So many moments we spent sharing our lives.

The concept of us I had to solidify,

I remember that shower when you became mine.


All those months together, are love didn’t go dry,

Doing what we wanted, going at our own pace,

We had all fun and excitement making time fly,

Summer ended and our next move we had to face.


Thinking of my love for you I would always sigh,

I knew nothing could undo what we’d built thus far,

Yet feelings got shaky like a tower built too high,

Vision obscured by thick smoke like that of a cigar.


To know the reason things changed we have to ask why,

But there are not always answers to our questions.

I really hope that this is not a last goodbye,

How to be friends, well I’m open to suggestions.


Us didn’t work out, our end it doesn’t imply,

For I still care for you and want you in my life.

This is to the girl that with me will not be shy,

To the one I hope to never have any more strife.

© 2011 L Lopez

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This was so sweet and also so beautifully written.

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love it really beautiful you did a nice job

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on October 25, 2011
Last Updated on October 27, 2011
Tags: Lesbian, Love, Break up


L Lopez
L Lopez

Salinas, CA

I am a recreational writer. Mostly write poetry as a means of dealing with emotions and events in my life. I'm a latina, so some of my writing is in Spanish. I'm really looking to share and get some f.. more..

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A Poem by L Lopez