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A Poem by LizLadyNinja
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Dunno, restoring it right now

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© 2009 LizLadyNinja


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Dunno you take really time .

Posted 3 Years Ago


what's better than writing to let it out? I find myself so stressed if I skip one day of writing!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this makes me think to hard it was a good write though but now since i am stuck inside my head thinking im gonna go...hmmm...some how sit on a big rock coming out of the middle of a river...well it was a pleasure reading your work and i will continue ur stuff after my river sit thingy

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A great rant and a good way to get it out in the open...well done!


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pretty good, m'dear. One thing I have to say, though--it's not a critique, just noticed a typo. In the third stanza, third line, I think you meant "quiet drink" instead of "quite drink." Just FYI.

Other then that minor detail, great poem. Hopefully it got that steam out of ya.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a great piece. I have no critique. :D perfect

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 18, 2009

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LizLadyNinja
LizLadyNinja

Denver, CO



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I joined Writerscafe almost 10 years ago, when it was in its infancy. I dealt with the breakdown when it lost our writing and many of my pieces were unrecoverable. Which, as you can imagine was pretty.. more..

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