Independece Day

Independece Day

A Poem by the in between
"

How I depicted my fourth of July day :D

"
The colors of today
are permanently shattering
then fading in the darkness
Splashes of the Night Sky
Boomed and sent stretches
of echos to the empty star sky
My heart stopped in
unison; forced to listen 
too as ears do.
The eyes too weary to be bothered 
just stared without the imgaination 
of the mind. 
Instant to each instant
did the fire appear as a flower
Chemicals dancing with the wind
If only they wouldn't die so 
quickly.

© 2011 the in between


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the in between
This isn't something I worked on to make it fantastic, just something I played with. Review if you'd like to :)

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Added on August 23, 2011
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