"41 Syllables Are Not Enough"

"41 Syllables Are Not Enough"

A Poem by L.C. Jarrette
"

You're the real Wonder Woman...

"



 

Mother

Selfless, irreplaceable

Loving, correcting, sacrificing

Best friend, adviser, ally, confidante

Understanding, helping, supporting

Special, trustworthy

Friend

© 2017 L.C. Jarrette


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Short and to the point... Nothing can ever replace mother's love and I love how this poem emphasizes on that

Posted 2 Years Ago


All true. None can replace a mother. Wonderful words!

Posted 3 Years Ago


L.C. Jarrette

3 Years Ago

thank you very much zoe...i'm still reading the poems you sent me. :)
Zoya

3 Years Ago

No problem
very well written! A mother's love can never be written, only felt. but you have described it. loved it

Posted 3 Years Ago


L.C. Jarrette

3 Years Ago

thank you for reading...i'm glad you like it
Mothers truly are.....
Words are in efficient and insufficient to prove the worth of mama....I loved it..:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


L.C. Jarrette

3 Years Ago

yes...words are not enough
Sometimes grammar is not needed. Single words, placed correctly, can communicate more meaning than all the sentences in the world. Well done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


L.C. Jarrette

3 Years Ago

ay...hehe thank you
but please do correct me if there are any grammatical errors. i am open a.. read more
Maternal love is the strongest. Even in the animal kingdom it is instinctive. Well done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


L.C. Jarrette

3 Years Ago

you are definitely right! thank you relic...
so true dear...all of us love our mothers and they really have this deep place in the corner of our hearts....
may god bless them with good health and may they be smiling all the time....
nicely penned...i loved it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


L.C. Jarrette

3 Years Ago

thank you very much! :)
I think it should be 41 syllables are not enough

Posted 3 Years Ago


L.C. Jarrette

3 Years Ago

ay!! oops...haha
thanks rajat!
:D
Very great title..........

Posted 3 Years Ago


Truly said. Very well written.

Posted 3 Years Ago


L.C. Jarrette

3 Years Ago

thank you najam...
Najam Us Saher

3 Years Ago

You're welcome. ☺

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L.C. Jarrette

Philippines



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