Happiness in a Bottle

Happiness in a Bottle

 

My love is in this bottle.

I hope you find it.

I cannot live without you.

Please come and find me.

I will be waiting for you.

 

I am waiting; where are you?

I love you so much.

Could you send a care package?

Please send me your love.

I pine away for this gift.

 

I am fading away now.

Why didn’t you come?

Our life would be perfect.

But now I am gone.

Your love will be the cure.

 

My happiness is complete;

You came and found me!

Now I can rest peacefully.

My life is perfect.

In your arms I die in peace.

Author's Note

Desperate love

Reviews

[Tory]

Thanks! It is a good thing in a way, because it represents the strong emotions teenagers and many people feel as they "fall in love", whether they truly are in love or not. In this poem, though, it is a good thing, because it shows her undying love for him, whoever it is ;) Thanks for the review! :D

[alexlessah]

i see the bit of desperation but thats good right? its very good though!