The Death of Me

The Death of Me

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This compulsive dependance that leaves my hands shaking,

The thrill of intangible fire that makes me sweat,

This never ending burning passion and bloodlust.

The stuff that makes me click my nails

Or shake my knees and roll back my eyes,

The otherworldly substance that makes my heartbeat increase, 

The ungodly sensation that makes me rise.

This gateway into hell and back,

Satanic temptation that will weave my epitaph

Following me to the grave,

Cutting its infectious roots deep into me.

With its infernal seduction

And sensual deceit, 

Music will be the death of me.

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just random :)

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A very lovely short poem, i liked it a lot :3

Posted 11 Years Ago


Outstanding as a short poem. Those are the most powerful. Dark and descriptive.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like it. Dark and quiet, but powerful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


wonderfully written

Posted 11 Years Ago


This was (just a little) dark and lovely and the description was amazing. Such a unique poem. Very, very well writen.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Gotta love the music ...and your word choice in this piece that creates vivid imagery..keep writing you show talent

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great word choices in this well written piece.....Whisk

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 4, 2012
Last Updated on June 4, 2012
Tags: drugs, music, gateway, sensation, pleasure, satan, evil

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that place around the street corner from that guy., NY



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