Re: first picture prompt

Through her eyes

The aurora dripped

Forming tiny puddles on the floor

Rivers of hue that flooded away, 

Of what she was

Of what she had been

Of what she had seen,

Heard and touched.

Of what she had inside

Until there was nothing left

Of an existence paper thin

But apathy

But gray

Author's Note

for picture prompts. wrote this in around 5 minutes, it just came to me really fast i guess. enjoy!

Reviews

[Kate Hunter]

well done. I love those days when everything just comes to you and it all falls into place. Well written, the imagery and metaphors were great.

[eglantine]

Nice! I'd try playing around more with line spacing

[Lyfelucke]

Good little poem here. Metaphysical and emotional. That is a excellent combination.

[just is]

Of what she was
Of what she had been
Of what she had seen,

I loved this part, this is amazing