Strange Geogrphics

Strange Geogrphics

A Poem by Morgan Storms
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What it might look like to people....

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There's night blooming jasmine
In an abandoned asylum
In and overgrown forest
In a lobotomized brain

There's a morning mist
In a forgotten quarry
A lone paradise
In a multiple personality
There's a welcoming light
In the starry heavens
Just out of reach
After hours of shock therapy
There's a rust colored run off
Poisoning a beautiful lake
Arising a deep depression
In the eyes of a sociopath
There's a desk in an office
Seating a megalomanic doctor
With alternate intentions
Trying to satiate his visceral lust

© 2013 Morgan Storms


Author's Note

Morgan Storms
Just a poem inspired by looking at pictures of abandoned places.

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The scent of cloves permeates my mind as I listen to this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Morgan Storms

10 Years Ago

Thanks. Thanks for reading.
Very interesting, it sounds like maybe the place was arranged to be perceived as that, or maybe that is what the espectators where programmed to expect before they got there.

Awesome writing style, enjoyable to read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Morgan Storms

10 Years Ago

Thanks. It was difficult to try to convey the message about each stanza being a different mental dis.. read more
SquinklaPsyOps

10 Years Ago

Is good to meet an author with valuable standards.
Morgan Storms

10 Years Ago

Thanks. That was nice of you.
Loved it! Some brilliant imagery in this one. Outstanding work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Morgan Storms

10 Years Ago

Thanks, baby! :)
Each paragraph is designated to a specific condition etc...I was exploring the dark. It's meant to be taken in a way that makes the reader feel how awful it was for someone to be in an asylum. And how some doctors weren't good doctors.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Thats a lot Psychotic rambling there, a troubled soul perhaps .............. got dark in the end, nah?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Morgan Storms

10 Years Ago

I think its much better these days. The movies do make it seem terrible though. I just read this art.. read more
WILDERNESS

10 Years Ago

Welcome dear, thanks for sharing .........
Maryam Mottahedeh

10 Years Ago

Oooo, I like it.. the sense of repeating message in a different form each time, from a different per.. read more

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Added on August 19, 2013
Last Updated on August 19, 2013
Tags: asylum, abandoned, strange, psychology

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Morgan Storms
Morgan Storms

Sedona, AZ



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