Thoughts While Smoking a Cigar

Thoughts While Smoking a Cigar

A Poem by Morgan Storms
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Just my rambling brain doing what it does best!

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A plethora of trendy dishonesty
Plagues the noble soul
There are flaws in wisdom; knowledge
But the heart belongs to love everlasting
There's not reality for perfection
Life should be infused with
light, beauty and liberation
Where life faults; ignorance
Its the express lane to 
Sorrow, detestation and apocalypse
The true elixir
For the honest aficionado
Is the unusual complexity
Of redemption

© 2014 Morgan Storms


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Nothing better than a cigar and times to think. I don't smoke cigarettes. I do like a good cigar. I like the tone of the poem.A relax flow of words leading the reader to good place and a need a for a good cigar. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Morgan Storms

9 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote. I appreciate your kind review.
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome. Always a pleasure to read your words.



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Unique word play with thoughts conjoined with emotion.clever.short and sweet.to the point.well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ether lifes up in smoke or for me, i ponder the thought while having a smoke it helps me relax, love how the words come together in this piece. great job thank you for sharing

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Morgan Storms

7 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time to review! :)
Nice play of words. Life infused with liberation, nice. Enlightenment.

Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Morgan Storms

7 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
I like the conclusion... speaks of Karma. That's what I get from this complex piece:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Morgan Storms

9 Years Ago

I know its late to comment and say thank you, but thank you!!!! :)
Nothing better than a cigar and times to think. I don't smoke cigarettes. I do like a good cigar. I like the tone of the poem.A relax flow of words leading the reader to good place and a need a for a good cigar. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Morgan Storms

9 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote. I appreciate your kind review.
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome. Always a pleasure to read your words.
I'm convinced God was s**t faced when he created the human race

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Morgan Storms

9 Years Ago

I agree to that! :)
I really find this sharp and intellectual write, well need to understand the positively about life. I truly enjoyed this read and thank you for spreading awareness my friend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Morgan Storms

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
A. Amos

9 Years Ago

You're most welcome my dear
Thats how it should be .......... but look at humanity, going in the opposite direction. Nice one..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Morgan Storms

9 Years Ago

Of course its going in the wrong direction, but thankfully there are those of us holding it together.. read more
WILDERNESS

9 Years Ago

The pen is mightier than the sword.............. isnt that what tthey say.......... :)
Morgan Storms

9 Years Ago

Funny, I think of that line sometimes. Some days I agree and other days I call bullS#$% HAHA! But it.. read more

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Added on August 2, 2014
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Tags: Honesty, complexity, liberation, wisdom, trendy

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Morgan Storms
Morgan Storms

Sedona, AZ



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