Incomplete Heartache

Incomplete Heartache

A Poem by Morgan Storms
"

Dreaming the dream.

"

In my dream

He's a picturesque phantom

His heavenly scent

Cedar and sage

 

In my dream

We reoccur in an antiquated fairytale

His voice softly handsome

An echo in my heart

 

In my dream

His kiss is sweet as midnight

His comments are

Muffled yearnings

 

In my dream

Our fears become an awakening fragility

Sadly our love won't last

Each morning is time-past

 

© 2015 Morgan Storms


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I liked the poem. Sweet dreams must end.
"In my dream
Our fears become an awakening fragility
Sadly our love won't last
Each morning is time-past"
Above lines true and real. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Morgan Storms

5 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing. :) I appreciate it.
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome.



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so beautifully sad and yet a very strong write. sigh....the longing for something lasting and real is felt by me

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Morgan Storms

5 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and taking the time to review. It is much appreciated. :)
just another mac without her

5 Years Ago

you are welcome, it was a pleasure to read you
I Love your writing Morgan... it's had depth and breath... it's sophisticated

It sounds to me as though it's a recurring or a sequence of dreams of you and him... yes or am I just projecting?


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Morgan Storms

5 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and no, you're correct and not projecting. :)
I liked the poem. Sweet dreams must end.
"In my dream
Our fears become an awakening fragility
Sadly our love won't last
Each morning is time-past"
Above lines true and real. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Morgan Storms

5 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing. :) I appreciate it.
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome.
May your dreams come true......... nice flowing poem and sensitive.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Morgan Storms

5 Years Ago

Thank you very much! I appreciate your review.
WILDERNESS

5 Years Ago

Always welcome dear......
Its a beautiful piece. Would have loved a little more though because your piece is such that one does crave for an even more detailed picture. But otherwise it's an amazing write up. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Morgan Storms

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I actually thought it was a bit short myself. :)
Flutterby aish

5 Years Ago

:D Welcome.
Please review! It's important to me to have feedback.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on May 20, 2015
Last Updated on May 20, 2015
Tags: love, heartache, incomplete, dream, night, soft, fears, heart

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Morgan Storms
Morgan Storms

Sedona, AZ



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