My Love, My Love

My Love, My Love i don't last forever
The clock will tick faster than you’ll imagine
Your cries of joy leave me with more pressure
Your eyes eat me up like it’s a madden

Romantically insane I chose to be
Craftiness of your lies leave me astray
I’d hate love to turn into the black sea
My heart isn’t seen as something at the buffet

Standing tall you can’t be a shaken
the love of my life is invisible
the heart choke to death can not be taken
I try hard not to be miserable

Run, Run my love, life is too cruel for you
Just dont leave my heart for the dogs to chew

Reviews

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Awesome and I love the last lines :) Nice to meet you and welcome to WC

[longlivenate]

Thanks so much. I love this site.

[micky]

wow raw and powerful and breathtaking ...I love this piece :)

[longlivenate]

Thanks... Its a future message for the ones i love.

[micky]

wow it's deep and beautiful keep writing...

[R Smith]

excellent writing and those last two lines are a real killer, well done :)

[longlivenate]

thanks Alot.

[Ankita]

it's a nice poem..

loved the last lines :)
Saving your love and at the same time trying to protect ones heart :)
keep it up

[longlivenate]

thanks ill try make more.

[Ankita]

you're welcome :)