Confused

Confused

A Poem by longlivenate

I can't think
I'm confused... all the time all because off you
You keep me up all night 
Because your in my dreams

© 2015 longlivenate


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Kind of a weird order, the last line doesn't fit that well either, good concept though

Posted 8 Years Ago


longlivenate

8 Years Ago

Thanks...i didn't really know what to do with that last line
I love this poem it's shirt and sweet....well done :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

longlivenate

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much :)
micky

8 Years Ago

ur welcome :)

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Added on June 7, 2015
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Tags: Confused, Love, poetry, Romance, Romantic poetry

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