NeverLand

NeverLand

A Poem by Andrea M. Ramey
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Dreams...

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I don't know the begining to my story anymore,

So I'm traveling down a path with no end in sight.

They tell me I'll do great,

But I look at them and where they're at and think,

If I can do great then why aren't you?

Life is not easy, life isn't always fun.

 As of right now though?

I'm not sure where my life is gonna go.

 My story has yet to be written,

But in many ways it looks as though some people have already choosen me a path with a end.

I'm ready for my wings sprout,

I wanna fly

I wanna fly away to my neverland.

© 2013 Andrea M. Ramey


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I feel like I am at a similar place in my life with college. People tell me that I can do one million different things, and I love them for that. It is hard to stand on those crossroads and pick a direction. It gets really complicated when there are lots of directions you could take, and there are people who direct you to go down each of those paths. It can be overwhelming sometimes.

I relate to these lines the most:

I'm not sure where my life is gonna go.
My story has yet to be written,

I agree with Ashlly about why we write too.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I feel like I am at a similar place in my life with college. People tell me that I can do one million different things, and I love them for that. It is hard to stand on those crossroads and pick a direction. It gets really complicated when there are lots of directions you could take, and there are people who direct you to go down each of those paths. It can be overwhelming sometimes.

I relate to these lines the most:

I'm not sure where my life is gonna go.
My story has yet to be written,

I agree with Ashlly about why we write too.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I LILKE THIS, I CAN TOTTALLY RELATE, THATS WHY WE WRITE HALF THE TIME, BECAUSE WE CAN CREATE THAT NEVERLAND AND TAKE THOSE READERS WITH US, TO A PLACE WE FIND UTTERLY PERFECT AND THINGS WILL GO THE WAY OUR PEN WANTS IT TO

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Andrea M. Ramey

11 Years Ago

YESSS!!! fjngosjnfsjngvoaoifhsohg YESSSS!!!!! Everything goes as YOU want it to. It doesn't have to .. read more
Ashly Christen

11 Years Ago

lol
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Added on January 3, 2013
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Tags: Dreams, hope, disappointments, life, Neverland, fly, fly away, story, hard, easy, traveling, paths, fun, unsure, lost

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Andrea M. Ramey
Andrea M. Ramey

Wilson, NC



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When I write it doesn't matter if it's a poem, story, or lyrics my intent is to having you seeing a "mini movie" in your head. Everything I write has a story/reason for why I wrote it as I did. I know.. more..

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