Sleep my child

Sleep my child

A Poem by Valkyrie Warrior
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This is a poem I came up with when I was holding my baby sister. I hope you like it :)

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Sleep my child for it is night and you yet lack the might to face the worlds endless tasks and in t's shining glory bask.

 

Sleep my child slight and small for from my arms you'll never fall and I will wait until you leap into the world with paths so steep.

 

So sleep my little child sleep for in my arms you'll never weep.

 

 

 

 

Thank you.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Runner Up

Feb 2, 2015


 

 

 

© 2015 Valkyrie Warrior


Author's Note

Valkyrie Warrior
Not really my best but oh well

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This is so tenderly gentle, a precious lullaby of love. Full of light and sweet wishes, it makes the darkness of the world seem to melt away. xo

Posted 4 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much Eros!!
Echoes of Eros

4 Years Ago

Anytime, sweet friend. :)
Valkyrie Warrior

4 Years Ago

:)!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So sleep my little child sleep for in my arms you'll never weep.

love this line

Posted 4 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much
World's and I was lost about t' shining glory.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

4 Years Ago

Wow thank you so much!
Another wonderful expression of pure feeling, I just wish you had given us a little more with this one. Maybe some imagery or some metaphor. Just something... more.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much! I am afarid I could not write more because it was a spur of the moment thing, s.. read more
Congratulations!
This piece is a finalist for Promote Me! X.
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Posted 4 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
REALLY COOL! I like it a lot!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

4 Years Ago

I am glad you like it. Thank you for reviewing.
C. Lee Battaglia

4 Years Ago

Your welcome.
Valkyrie Warrior

4 Years Ago

:)........
Beautiful and so.touchingly sweet. Glad I visited. Pen on....:)........

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Valkyrie Warrior

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much it really means a lot to me
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).........
Valkyrie Warrior

4 Years Ago

I am so glad you liked it.
It is a beautiful poem. Your use of words create perfect description of love for child. Holding a small child showed us we must keep them safe and show them love and care. You did. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

4 Years Ago

Wow thank you for all you feedback

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Added on October 29, 2014
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