BLUE

BLUE

A Poem by Valkyrie Warrior
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For Afraa

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B beautiful, bouncy, bright.

L lonely, lost, loveless.

U untold story.

E exposed, expired.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1st place

Mar 10, 2015

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2015 Valkyrie Warrior


Author's Note

Valkyrie Warrior
I tried to tell a story, if anyone picks up on it, please tell me your opinions if you find the story :)

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Very creative and cool! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Thanks!!!!!!
I love this! Pithy and pretty! I think I can see a story but my thoughts are so jumbled that it's hard to explain it straight. It's like different shades of blue dance on the canvas and slowly fade into black nothing with the end. From bright to sad to the story within and it unfolds, exposes and ends everything with it into only black. Idk if it made sense to you :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

it made perfect sense! Thank you for the meaningful review :)
Sindu

9 Years Ago

Yw... :) ..
The words you chose for this poem are all perfect and really keep the flow consistent. This is a very good acrostic poem! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
Very good use of words. Create thoughts and visions using the minimum amount of words. This is hard to do. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Wow thank you!!
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

:-D....................
Lol I see the Afraa challenge has reached here too :)
Sweet piece and a great acrostic
Keep goin :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
I like how simple it is!
Short and sweet!
Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
I understand the story. That's a nice acrostic.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Cool I am glad : ) Thank you for reviewing
Damn, this is all kinds of beautiful! Although you worked through it fast, it came out amazing! Wow, I applaud you for this, Lorna. This is definitely going on my favorites. Thank you for participating!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

I am glad you reviewed it and liked. Did you find the story in it?
Afraa

9 Years Ago

Forgive me... I have read this over fifty times, and can't seem to figure it out. When I think of th.. read more
Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Never mind :)

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