Psycho

Psycho

A Poem by Valkyrie Warrior
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In the shadows it lurks

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Waiting for the next victim                 

Around every corner, in every shadow

Tonight it strikes again

Creeping ever closer, waiting for the chance to strike

Hell is waiting to be unleashed

 

 

Over and over, no one will find it

Under doorways, not under beds

Tonight you are the victim   

© 2015 Valkyrie Warrior


Author's Note

Valkyrie Warrior
Acrostics, acrostics, acrostics

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Very creative :) It all fits together nicely ~

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Thank you!!
This is really cool. I absolutely love it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much!!
I LOVE ACROSTICS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ahem, sorry for the enthusiasm. They're just so much fun to write...it's like writing a poem, but then you get to decide what secret message to display on the side. This is a great one though. "Watch out", I love it. Awesome =)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Wow thank you for the enthusiastic review!!!!!
Since i was a kid i always loved acrostic poems, before i knew they had a name for what they are.
This poem is a good example of what a good Acrostic is and what it can be. It is really enjoyable :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much Reeg!
Nice acrostic... I find these aren't the easiest of writes to do but always fun :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Yeah I do really enjoy them! Thank you!
Hey It was very nice and scary my friend. Specially the last line Tonight you are the victim

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

I am glad you liked it, thank you for reviewing!
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great psycho i love it. very short and hiting the point. whoa i am next victim i love it. please kill me

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much!!
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9 Years Ago

you very welcome and much.
I like this a lot! good job! would like to see this written like on a halloween scroll or something :P

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

ha lol, thank you for the review Kayleen
Should it be "waiting for the chance to strike?" , not 'change'. I do love acrostic poems, though I admit I don't write them very often. We are all victims in whatever type of Hell that may be waiting. All we have to do is prepare and be ready to fight hard.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Too right! Oops damn dyslexia!!
very interesting...scary, but beautifully written!! What's a little darkness behind a little light? :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

wow thank you for the kind review! True true!

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Added on May 10, 2015
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Tags: dark, acrostic

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