Blistering touch

Blistering touch

A Poem by Valkyrie Warrior
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Painful love

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Your kisses burn into my skin

A love, a hate so powerful

Your memory was craved into my heart

With fingers that clawed at my skin

Your words leave blisters in my mouth

Your tears leave salt on my cheeks

I cry for you

I beg you to go

When you plead "stop!" I must go on

When I cry "more!" you shrink away

You love feeds my heart, and steals my soul

My words rub salt in your wounds, while my fingers wipe away your tears

I hate to love you

You love to hate me

Painful love I all this can ever be

 

 

© 2015 Valkyrie Warrior


Author's Note

Valkyrie Warrior
I haven't posted for awhile ;)

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It is dark...love, hate. Two emotions that don't blend too well in a persons heart. But they certainly do here. It is awesome. Love it. 100 points.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

8 Years Ago

Oh i am flattered, thank you so much!!!
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Sure thing :)
Nice. I dislike poetry without hurt for some reason. This piece conveyed harsh emotions and a sense of helplessness for me. Well written and I think it's structured well.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the kind review!
With fingers that clawed at my skin
I hate to love you
You love to hate me.
Many of the above phrases could stand alone.
The reader can only hope that you solve the problem.
Suggest that you just make some new friends.

Your writing is superb, it is the relationship that remains
slightly odorous.

Again---- Make new friends.
Thanks for the wright.
----- Eagle Cruagh


Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much Eagle! I am very flattered!!
Eagle Cruagh

9 Years Ago

I have been an admirer for ages. I only wishes you the best.
----Eagle
Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Ahh thank you~!!!!
good poem
it conveys the fraile line between love and hate well

-Dream

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Thank you Dream!!

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Added on July 6, 2015
Last Updated on July 7, 2015
Tags: pain, love, boy, hard, evil

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Valkyrie Warrior

Vallhallah , My mind



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