Snap

Snap

A Poem by Valkyrie Warrior
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Just a dark poem

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Fingers in your hair

Hands under your chin

Flick of the wrist

Snap

White chalk line

Notepads

Photo's being taking

Snap

Funeral procession

Final goodbye's

Coffin lid closing

Snap





 RUNNER UP HUH, YOU WERE SO CLOSE! 

Jul 21, 2015

© 2015 Valkyrie Warrior


Author's Note

Valkyrie Warrior
I was bored

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Very cool piece, I enjoyed it! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
The progression of snapshots in life in different stages and states. An excellent poem...:)..............

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome. .....:).....
excellent snapshot of death in an instant of time

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot
I agree it's so simple yet petrifying.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
Snap was about all there is to this one, but
in it`s brevity and simplicity you have created
something new.
---- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Thank you I think.....
An interesting read in it's simplicity. "Flick of the wrist" as if so effortless. Great piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Thank you!!!

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Added on July 8, 2015
Last Updated on July 22, 2015
Tags: dark, murder

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Valkyrie Warrior
Valkyrie Warrior

Vallhallah , My mind



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