incarcerated heart

incarcerated heart

A Poem by lorrainelobotomy
"

not good at all

"

all those slips of paper

with your name written across

in that fancy cursive

sitting next to the hearts.

i threw them all away

just to let you know

your name rings a bell

as well as it bears a blow.

you're the worst i've ever had

but the best taste so far

because no matter what you do

you're smile is my star.

 

 

 

 

© 2009 lorrainelobotomy


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I loved this poem.. the beautiful and painful essence of love.. captured so well .
Very few words , but they are enough.

Posted 14 Years Ago


ahh thank you so much for getting the EXACT point of the poem :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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"you're the worst i've ever had
but the best taste so far"

That is so perfectly written... I wish I would've thought of it! ;] This poem really intrigues me--I think because I've had more than a couple situations like it in my life. (Or what I interpret it to be about, anyway) Like, in life, you're just bound to meet people you shouldn't have anything to do with, but still want so bad...

Posted 14 Years Ago



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lorrainelobotomy
lorrainelobotomy

whitinsville, MA



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im lorraine. this is what i do, and this is what i want to do for the rest of my life. more..

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