Dark dawn

Dark dawn

A Poem by Disturbed mind
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Is in the dawn that my dark thoughts took me completly...

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 The dawn is coming ... 
As always...hand in hand with loneliness ... 
This is the time when my heart bleeds more ... 
This is the time that rolls a tear in my face ... 

The dawn is coming ... 
She come dancing with my eternal torment ... 
Come to stranglehold me inside ... 
Come to make fun of my distressing feelings ... 

The dawn is coming ... 
I wish she didn't come ... 
Therefore i no longer stand this hell ... 
Therefore i no longer stand the loneliness ... 

The dawn is coming ... 
No ...she already come... she hugs me strong ... ... 
Stealing my all strength ... 
Stealing my will to live ...

© 2009 Disturbed mind


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Deep, dark, and wonderfuly portrayed in the mind of what is dreaded but has already been taken..

I really liked this. It made you stop and take notice, your words grabbing at you.. Good job!

Mag xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


Great write...

Posted 9 Years Ago


A riveting poem that combines the dark and light of life. Excellent job

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on October 1, 2009
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Disturbed mind
Disturbed mind

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Diving in the darkness of my mind insane you will discover various facets of my being hidden. Because frankly I am not what many think that i am...much less what they think know that I am. more..

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