hope moon...

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the cool air

of the midnight sky

more familiar

than the afternoon sun

lunar waves

pull at me

like the low tide

on the jersey shore

sucking the sand

beneath bare feet

when the moon is full

i feel clean

with want

waiting impatiently for the next

blue bus

to take me west

write your fairy tales

keep your reality

hidden deep

in the pockets

of those daydream jeans

it's scary

i know

this side of the bridge

the air is thick with it

i'll keep smilin'

one day we'll meet

in the middle

even-stevens

and see each other

for who we really are

and fall in love

all over again....

Reviews

[FireWoman]

I think there is insurmountable romance in the perception, the wonder in someone whom you've only met in dreams. Question is would the meeting be magical or awkward?

[Ed Hart]

but it in a bottle and consign it to the waters...when she brings it back to you, all the gods will be on your side

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

the imagery is great....somehow I see the lyrics of a tune.....the culmination at the end is hopeful. great write

vincent

[heich]

nice..i'll keep smilin'

one day we'll meet

in the middle

even-stevens

and see each other

for who we really are

and fall in love

all over again....

god i love these..

[Ashesh]

I believe in reunions and falling in love "all over again.."

[Michael of Gilead]

Personally, I like where it changes at "write your fairy tales"

Feels at bit JMish to me

[Emily B]

the air is so thick tonight, with none of the cool air of midnight . . . you took me there, drew me in, made me an active participant in the conversation,

that takes a skillful hand.

[the in between]

:) meeting at night at a full moon.. what a romantic poem. I like the rhythm the best. Your very talented.

[DamienHino]

I like this poem described very well...i enjoyed reading it

[RTB]

i disagree with the keep your reality and write ur fairy tale thing that is not a contradiction in his words he's saying don't lose reality in ur fairy tales but keep them to preserve ur open mind. don't be close minded but don't lose sight of what is happening his poem was great and made sense good job