shadows past...

love song

I don’t care

Where ever you have been

Whoever you once were

Or anything that you’ve seen

Walked the same path

Two strangers walk as one

Some harder than others

but we share the same bright sun

 

chorus:

I never thought you were insane

There’s no one to blame

We are all such fools

To worry like we do

I wanna stand you up straight

Carry all your weight

Because we all need to pull through

And, baby, I will with you…

 

I am not afraid

Of anything you have within

I only want to be with you

I can take it on the chin

You’ve got me enchanted

By the song you instill in me

Though my eyes are blinded

Through you I can still see

(chorus)

(instrumental/solo)

I won’t breathe a word

Of what‘s revealed in you

We could compare

This hell that we’ve been through

Open up your heart

Give it all to me

Get lost in this embrace

Let me set you free

(finish)

And if (and if) this love grows colder

And we can’t (we can’t) shine no more

I’ll lift (I will lift)you that much higher(higher)

And close the bedroom door

Because this want (this want) is so much stronger

I can’t breathe when you’re here

We’ve travelled alone so long

Together we won’t fear

Not another day will matter

Nothing matters from the past

We won’t worry about these feelings

We’ll just have make them last

Just another moment to make it last

One more minute…

Each second…

To last…..

 

 

 

Author's Note

not good at writing songs...not good at writing love poems...so writing a love song seems utterly ridiculous on my part...which is why i did it...

Reviews

[InkSlinger]

Well Brad we can't be good at everything we attempt, we all need something to challenge us, and keep us working towards a goal.. however, I will say that this wasn't all bad.. I do enjoy the wisdom that you impart.. and I you get the point across with little effort.. Keep working it..

[cfix]

Oh I am sure this would be delightful as lyrics. Just break it on down a little. You started out just fine. You need a couple of breaks and this would be quite awesome. Like it alot.

[Aven]

hahaha, love the author's note! yeah man, that's the spirit... I think you pulled it off, you really did... "And, baby, I will with you…"

[Robin]

most people dont realize how you have to strip a lyric down to the bones ~ you do ( loved the harmonies)

[Kerry O'Connor]

This would make a great lyric - your thoughts are deeper than those of many songs out there.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

your sweet side is just pouring out~ lol

[Michael of Gilead]

Love songs! and sweet little Christmas stories....What has happened to YOU??????

*tee hee* you're soft and fuzzy *smirk*

Do I hear banjo music?

[Jonathan De Elvira]

This was actually kinda good, yes, some love poems may required a good metaphoric reference but this is a song, should be softer in some part but you did a fair job in this one,

[KAREN]

I sure couldn't tell that your not good at writng songs! I would love to hear this with music!!