Freedom

Freedom

A Poem by Mariah Mcintyre
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A free verse poem I wrote about just being free and leaving everything behind.

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Running, soaring, driving away;

down this open road and sky;

the wind rushing past me;

like all the things that held me back;

not knowing where I'm going;

I might get lost;

but to be lost in this beautiful world;

would be finding myself in another;

not knowing where I'm going;

I might get lost;

but to be lost in this wide open world;

would be freedom, at last.

 

Running, soaring, driving away;

I'm letting go of everything without a word to say;

no note, no letter, no message, no goodbye;

I'm letting go of the place I know;

no longer afraid to die;

I've got no money;

and no place to go;

but I know I can make it;

all on my own.

 

I hope nobody misses me;

I hope no one cares;

because in the end my feeling for you are as forgotten and light as the air;

the air that now hits my face at full speed;

as I'm leaving this place;

to the place I was truely ment to be;

not knowing where I'm going;

I might get lost;

but finding my self is worth the cost.

 

I'm gone, I'm going;

so wish me luck;

Because one day we'll meet again;

and you'll still be stuck.

© 2009 Mariah Mcintyre


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I wish you the best of LUCK!! lol. Great write!! And I must say, I am in love with the imagery!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Mariah Mcintyre
Mariah Mcintyre

san diego, CA



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I started writing here at the age of 16 and now years later, at 26, I'm back to rediscover my creative outlet. Thanks for reading and rating :) more..

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