Summer 09

Summer 09

A Poem by Mariah Mcintyre

I can breathe.

The air is finally thinning and the clouds are splitting up.

The sun is out and things aint as tough

It's summer time now

And things are becoming new.

I'm ready to have some fun and I'm ready to dance with you.

So dance with me till we have to go home

Dance with me, no on has to know.

I want to feel alive

I want to be free

But most of all I just want you to be with me

And to be with you

And to be with me

That is truely the feeling of being free.

 

© 2009 Mariah Mcintyre


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thanks so much for your reviews :) this poem means a lot to me. It's hard for me to just let go and be happy sometimes and this really helps me accomplish that.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a very wonderful and beuatiful write here

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very sweet and romantic
such a beautiful poem

Great work

Orlando M

Posted 13 Years Ago


That was very lovely!
I really enjoyed reading it, because I absolutely ADORE summertime.
Your poem has great flow and was well-written. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very well written, I liked it!
And i def. have the same feeling!
Thanks god it's summer!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Mariah Mcintyre
Mariah Mcintyre

san diego, CA



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I started writing here at the age of 16 and now years later, at 26, I'm back to rediscover my creative outlet. Thanks for reading and rating :) more..

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