reminiscence.

reminiscence.

A Poem by lostnstars

       carry on with your dress
feel the plum petals
don't let your feet touch
the dry autumn leaves

keep running on coals
please stop humming tears
wait 'till you hear the sirens
and don't look back at me

i could still hear your voice
i loved it so much
i could still see your face,
all blurry but alluring to my deep eyes

i couldn't help but smile
we were at rest hearing you breathe 
i could still feel your hand
they were cold but they warmed me
the echoes were captivating loud
flashing backs and sorrow scars
they were all whispering goodbye
they told me to grip reminiscence

our tragedy was quite beautiful
i'll always look back and see you
now carry on with your dress,
maneuver your way delicately, beautiful

© 2015 lostnstars


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Good vision brought to life with the amazing description.
"our tragedy was quite beautiful
i'll always look back and see you
now carry on with your dress,
maneuver your way delicately, beautiful"
The above lines were my favorite. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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this is quite deep and powerful

Posted 1 Year Ago


i agree with many other writers on here, about the last few lines being very beautiful . This is a very beautiful and full of feeling ! well expressed ..

Posted 1 Year Ago


lostnstars

1 Year Ago

i appreciate your review, thank you so much!
a very good structured poem

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lostnstars

2 Years Ago

thank you so much! x
This really is so awesome... every time i read it, it gives me goosebumps T.T I love it! Keep writing senpai!

-Puffin

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lostnstars

2 Years Ago

Yeah das right. Haha I didn't know you read the same writings twice :p Anyways thankyouuu, and will .. read more
Why are your lines so beautiful 😭

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lostnstars

2 Years Ago

Aw thank you so much 💜
Peaches

2 Years Ago

You're welcome
Good vision brought to life with the amazing description.
"our tragedy was quite beautiful
i'll always look back and see you
now carry on with your dress,
maneuver your way delicately, beautiful"
The above lines were my favorite. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautifully written and you can really feel the emotions of the character in this!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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MJ
I absolutely love the imagery in this! I can definitely picture what the character is seeing. Good job :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"our tragedy was quite beautiful
i'll always look back and see you
now carry on with your dress,
maneuver your way delicately, beautiful"
Awesome write! I really enjoyed it but that last stanza was awesome!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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