i don't know your name anymore

You wrote “we will be remembered” on my arm then left when dawn is gone  

It’s way too obvious when you forced yourself to never tell me and stay

“I don’t wanna leave” with your soft voice won’t justify a truly warm embrace

It’s okay if you left me with love thirst, at least tell me what’s on your mind

I won’t tell my pen and paper to scribble what blinded anger i might think of you

I might don’t know what to do tonight so don’t call me up to help me breathe

I will be free from myself not yours because you weren’t mine after all

Sometimes my chest aches but it’s just my troubled heart asking for you

This is me against myself and I’m getting tired of not getting good sleep

Even when i take reality away naps, I still dream of myself finding you

Tomorrow I’ll ask for directions on a map we threw away when we got lost

I will slowly paint on a secret path we used to go with new home pavements

The last drops finally speak themselves to forgive and i will forget soon

Now a stranger with heavy coffee coat and familiar eyes always in the rain

I’ll be walking always looking down and pass by you singing my blues

Stumbling around who’s to blame now ‘we’, went to ‘me’ and ‘a you’

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and worthwhile poem shared my friend.
"Stumbling around who’s to blame now ‘we’, went to ‘me’ and ‘a you"
I did liked the above lines. After a break-up. Hard to know who is right and who is wrong. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[dokash hlebelo]

good constructed poem mam/man, wish to learn more from you

[Hurry]

GREAT WRITE AS ALWAYS! TOOK YOU LONG ENOUGH TO POST ANOTHER ONE!

I'll just keep my understandings to myself AHHAHA took me long enough to understand it a bit.

Nonetheless, ITS PRETTY AWSEOME, nay TIGHT!

-Puffin :3

[lostnstars]

Thankyouuu!! I want to hear what you thought about it though.

btw i'm patiently waiting for your writing as well.

-Blue Jay x

[Hurry]

First of all, ITS TIGHT!
1. A Promise is always a bad thing to leave to another.
2. A broken promise builds walls of distrust and fear and makes us never hope again.
3. Moving on is the act of forgiving and being grateful for the good memories and forgetting the bad ones and most importantly, it gives us the strength to give hope another chance :3

buuuuut ITS TIGHT