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A Poem by lostnstars

you're all made up in my mind
daydreams and dreams combined
in my own world, you are mine
do not ask, everything's fine
never wonder, everyone's kind
these songs will never unwind
sins will never get you fined

i had dreams about you twice
and i thought it was a prize
but it didn't caught me wise
i slept too early all nights
hoping to dream again thrice
but as a week, a month flies
it was all gone, no goodbyes

in dreams, i stopped to rely
i stopped asking for a reply
i, cut my wings to never fly
all i do now is just pass by
i now hum myself new lullaby
happy eyes, i started to cry
i need to stop living in lie

oh, look what you made me do
i thought this'll be for you
this ends with a me, not who
i should never wait on a cue
all my thoughts already flew
i wanted to have freedom too
i'm living in a reality blue

© 2019 lostnstars


Author's Note

lostnstars
I had fun working on the rhymes, meter and rhythms so i apologize that the content is not well structured.

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I adore your method of writing it. At first glance, my eyes would be much enticed by the pattern of the poem and how it was neatly arranged. Its like I'm reading lyrics to a song and this alone, will keep my eyes reading.

I really like how you're exploring new ways to write, from freestyle poems written from the heart, to structured rhymes of your emotions. And now, you made this very well organized poem. You are really amazing at this.

Please keep on writing and I'll be waiting to read your next work.

your number one fan
Puffin :3

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lostnstars

2 Years Ago

I appreciate this review, thankyou so much!!



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Honest words and thoughts. I liked them. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


I adore your method of writing it. At first glance, my eyes would be much enticed by the pattern of the poem and how it was neatly arranged. Its like I'm reading lyrics to a song and this alone, will keep my eyes reading.

I really like how you're exploring new ways to write, from freestyle poems written from the heart, to structured rhymes of your emotions. And now, you made this very well organized poem. You are really amazing at this.

Please keep on writing and I'll be waiting to read your next work.

your number one fan
Puffin :3

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lostnstars

2 Years Ago

I appreciate this review, thankyou so much!!

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Added on December 21, 2017
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