Spaceflight

Spaceflight

A Poem by R.R.Louderback

SciFaiku is simply Haiku with any, all, or none of the usual rules with the inclusion of one simple constraint: the topic must be related to science fiction. My efforts will attempt to adhere to the The SciFaiku Manifesto.

Spaceflight

Long 3-5-3 syllables

long time out
i pass through the stars
I'm ignored

Short 2-3-2 syllables

spaceflight
starlight streams
I dream


Traditional 5-7-5 syllables (same as in Japanese)

long years of travel
new worlds at the very end
empty planets wait

English 7-9-7 syllables

I sleep as galaxies pass
none wait at my landing site
no one ever has been there


Freeform 17 syllables (three phrases, short, longer, short)


In cryosleep half a universe passes
nebulae and galaxies ignore my flight
light itself runs beside my window

 

© 2009 R.R.Louderback


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LJW
long time out
i pass through the stars
I'm ignored

:-)


Awesome!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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R.R.Louderback
R.R.Louderback

Knightdale, MO



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I'm a former programmer, analyst, teacher for a big telecom. Retired after 25 years due to the sudden onset of blindness (I am visually impaired, not sightless) I now spend my time writing. I'm a p.. more..

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