the best summer

I swam in the most wonderful lake,

feeling the water rushing over my body,

the sunlight hitting on my face,

the sounds of the splashes and joy from the children

it was like a dream come true,

like the best summer ever.

I looked over the city that was below,

looking at that beauty made my eyes dazzled,

the sunshine made the city more enjoyable to look,

I promised myself I ouldn't foget this amazing day,

the best summer will always be in my memory.

Author's Note

Please ignore the word that's missing a "w".
Please tell me what you think ^_^

Reviews

[Jason]

Wow, great poem :)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I loved the imagery in this too, love. It was amazingly written. I liked the picture too. o:
Keep writing. You're great at it. Thanks for sharing. :D

[The Watcher]

This is a really vivid poem, and a nice picture too. Great write, and kudos!
100/100

[Castonovia]

Incredible pic, summer is the best, sweetest memories, wishing it were here already, but great description ;)

[Steven Cash]

OMG WHERE DID YOU GET THE PICTURE????

PM me cause I can't get reply notifications

VERY nice poem

[Love Demon]

Lol thanks :)

[Steven Cash]

np @ all

(sorry for replying soo late. I had a glitch, and was never able to see you responded til now)

[Sami Khalil]

Nice poem... Thank you for sharing ... The pic is good too...

[Love Demon]

Thanks :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[Weeping Willow]

great, i love summer and you just reminded me what i look forward to after school. i wish it where summer, but for now I just keep reading this poem.

[Love Demon]

why thank you!! :D

[Dominique]

That is a wonderful poem. I like it.

[Love Demon]

Thank you :)

[FrancescaX]

i like the pic.....
wish summer could last forever...but it wouldnt be all that memorable if it happened everyday.
beautiful description.

viva

[Love Demon]

Thanks :D

[Broken Soul]

Descibing a great day in a wonderful way, nice.

( you do know you can edit your poems right..?)

[Love Demon]

Thanks
Yeah, I know I can edit this, but I'm using a iPad right now, I'll fix the errors later.

[Broken Soul]

Aha i see, sorry for being the smart a*s i am ^_^

[Love Demon]

Your alright ^_^