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the best summer

the best summer

A Poem by Love Demon


I swam in the most wonderful lake,
feeling the water rushing over my body,
the sunlight hitting on my face,
the sounds of the splashes and joy from the children
it was like a dream come true,
like the best summer ever.
I looked over the city that was below,
looking at that beauty made my eyes dazzled,
the sunshine made the city more enjoyable to look,
I promised myself I ouldn't foget this amazing day,
the best summer will always be in my memory.

© 2012 Love Demon


Author's Note

Love Demon
Please ignore the word that's missing a "w".
Please tell me what you think ^_^

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I ignored it, Misss....
This is a good poem, am glad that you always admire what you see (:

Posted 7 Years Ago


Love Demon

7 Years Ago

Thank you :*
Whoa, this poem is so beautiful and amazing! :D
The picture is so awesome too :D
I love it!
100/100

Posted 7 Years Ago


Love Demon

7 Years Ago

Thanks :*
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Sounds magical. My summer sucked besides being on WC that cheered me up but sounds peaceful and serene :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Love Demon

7 Years Ago

Thanks :*

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Hiya, names Hexctan! :DDDDDD I'm a 16 year old girl that loves to review other writers work and write poetry and books. As you can see I am a crazy kingdom hearts fan XD I do love anime, a.. more..

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