Insecurities Dreaming

Insecurities Dreaming

A Poem by lovejulez03
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Wanting control is never a simple thing

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For once let me be the only one you pine for

For once let me be the mysterious siren

 

For once let me control you, in infinite ways

For always let me have you within my reach

 

For once let me be the perfect creature

For once let me feel what it’s like to be beautiful

 

For once let me be more than just a pretty smile

For always let me be the one who got away

© 2014 lovejulez03


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Or just let things happen...I learned long ago...don't make things complicated and you'll most likely see the results you want...do your thing...go watch a movie by yourself...get your nails done...love yourself...and someone will notice that. Just a food for thought. Nevertheless, a deep emotive write expressed on his you currently feel. And very well expressed indeed.

Posted 9 Years Ago


for once let me be the perfect picture. we all want to feel special sometimes even if its for a brief moment .

good work

Posted 9 Years Ago


lovejulez03

9 Years Ago

Thanks for reading, its appreciated
Beautiful poem. You poured your heart out in this one. We all strive to be that one that compares to no other... for the one we truly want and love. Awesome last line as well. Very nice, my friend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


lovejulez03

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading ,I appreciate it
Wanting control is not a good thing but earning respect is better I guess. I could be wrong...A wonderful write...:)............

Posted 9 Years Ago


lovejulez03

9 Years Ago

You're right Sami.. human nature is so complex and so simple at the same time. Our need to control c.. read more
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Wow. So true. Thank you for the validation. Take care...:)......................
and when you get away we have to dream about you

Posted 9 Years Ago


lovejulez03

9 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by and reading, I appreciate it :)
 wordman

9 Years Ago

you are welcome

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