Philosophy of Nothing

Philosophy of Nothing

A Poem by love, lorey

"It's time to clean," said the Devil, dressed in blue.

"Haven't much time, with the sun in the sky."

Einstein brushes dust particles off a chair, and watches them in wonder.

Jesus laughs with the parlor maid as they make their way through the corridors.

"Yes, we must clean today. The moons in the sky, and mankind is in the grey."

© 2013 love, lorey


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This is f*****g amazing! It left me speechless. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


love, lorey

10 Years Ago

Thank you thank you thank you! :)
Glenn McCrary

10 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)
your use of imagery and metaphor is incredible

Posted 10 Years Ago


love, lorey

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much! Greatly appreciated :)
Deeply layered symbolism. Thanks for stealing away my entire afternoon while I endeavor to figure you out.

Posted 10 Years Ago


love, lorey

10 Years Ago

I'm like the Twilight Zone wrapped in a layer of Outer Limits, but with Kung-Fu. :)

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great piece. i like the references to the devil and einstein and jesus i have a poem where i refer to michael angelo it's called I hope you finally remember. it would seem it is of a similar style though your's is less dark... i like the first line in particular of this poem... it is indeed the philosophy of nothing and yet so interesting

Posted 10 Years Ago


love, lorey

10 Years Ago

Thank you! I'll have to stop by soon and have a read! :)
This is amazing poetry. Each statement leading me to the perfect ending. I read Einstein held great regret. Modern invention improved and can destroy the path of life.
"Yes, we must clean today. The moons in the sky, and mankind is in the grey."
The above line is true. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


love, lorey

10 Years Ago

Thanks for such a lovely review! I'm so glad you could enjoy it!
A veritable modern parable with apposite symbolism. Very nice!

Posted 10 Years Ago


love, lorey

10 Years Ago

Thank you, very much :)
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it s really great poem . i love short and simply poems. and this on is one of them. i love last part great ending. keep writing

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Added on November 18, 2013
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Tags: Einstein, Jesus, colors, nonsense, philosophy

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